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Yellow, on a Brick Road

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It may not be a brick road exactly, but I liked the idea of the word play with... (take a guess)!
Yellow... Yes, it is!

Made with Daz Studio 4.5; Reality 2.5 and Luxrender 1.2
No post work was done.

Thanking you in advance for your comments, critiques and favourites! Enjoy!

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Vision - The only reason i went for a 3.5 star rating on it is because of the shadows and quality of the brick road in comparison to the shiny high grade car. Suggestion - Giving the road more texture, adding in some natural dots of light that you often find in stone

Originality - Well thought of idea with great reference

Technique - On the car, amazing, shadows form softly over the bodywork, not too intruding but enough to be noticed. Location of the fountain has got my head kind of spinning, to me it looks like the car is perched on the bedding of the fountain, which wouldn't make sense to do when locating the fountain itself

Impact - The contrast makes the car stand out massively, true define focal here. But the road contradicts the impact the car gives. Yeah it weirdly enhances the cars look, but as a whole it downgrades the quality of the piece.

This is mostly assuming that the bg is your work, your creation.

Hope it helps in a tiny way